Show don't tell - short story

                          This is a show don't tell story about Te Pona. 😋                          

His bright white t -shirt was tight up on his slim body and flowing in the wind. He opened his big brown eyes and they shone upon the glowing sun. when the breeze comes past his hair as black as the night skies it blows slowly in the wind.

His deep voice talks constantly, churning out hilarious jokes and funny sounds. He is always getting good marks, “good boy Te Pona”. He walks around the whole school beside his many friends. His mouth squealing and saying stupid things throughout the day is amusing for everybody.

Te Pona values family over everything, he is a very loyal person and is always honest to his peers. His kind bright smile is always showing and he is a really cool person. His shoes shine like the sun as he sprints from his class into the unknown. Forever trying never giving up in his subjects, his pride strong as a kangaroo's boot to the head. Te Pona!!